Write a sentence that opens with a subordinating conjunction.
Date: 21st Apr 2016 @ 4:53pm
Date: 21st Apr 2016 @ 4:53pm
Amy wrote:
Because the boat went to fast , the girl went up.
Harvey wrote:
You could of said she flown up
Tom s Marcus wrote:
Because the three kids are having fun they are getting soaked.
Reply to this threadHarvey wrote:
Eventhough she was scared, she still went on the boat
Lucas wrote:
Very good harvey.
Owen wrote:
Rapidly, the girls are on deadly,fast speed boat in the dark,blue,wavy sea. The girls are terrified like there trapped in a house by themselves why they was falling of the boat
Dan wrote:
You used a good subordinating conjunction.
Dan wrote:
Rapidly, the girls were in a speed boat and suddenly they got a huge shock. Strangely the boat lifted.
Harrison wrote:
Nice opener
Joel wrote:
Start with a subordinating conjunction
Dan wrote:
Strangely, the girls were in a speed boat and they got a big shock. Wiredly the boat lifted up.
Reply to this threadCharlotte and Felicity wrote:
When they were on the boat, the girls screamed because it was so much fun.
Reply to this threadwrote:
The girls are screaming because the boat is going to fast.
Hannah Maddison wrote:
Make sure you put your name
Charlotte g wrote:
Because the boat was crashing they fealt scared.
Harvey wrote:
Where is the comma in it
Erin wrote:
Because the boat tipped over to one side, the girl went up into the air.
Reply to this threadwrote:
Because the three kids were having so much fun one of the girls nearly fell off .
Rhianna and Blossom wrote:
We've fixed it Mr Loftus
Because the three kids are having so much fun , one of the girls nearly fell off
Maddison and hannah wrote:
Because the boat was going to fast, the little girl fell out.
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