Write a sentence that opens with an adverb about this picture.

Date: 21st Apr 2016 @ 4:53pm

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Aaron and Megan wrote:

Quickly,Alerdiel chomped the boat.

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Amy wrote:

Dangerously, the a crocodile ate the boat.

Harvey wrote:

You could of used an extended noun phrase like the green,hungry.

Amy wrote:

Dangerously, the green, hungry crocodile ate the boat.

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Erin wrote:

The mean , horrifying alligator is trying to kill the man.

Mr Loftus wrote:

You haven't opened the sentence with a simile.

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Charlotte g wrote:

Quickly the crocodile ate the boat.

Tom s Marcus wrote:

You need a comma after quickly.

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Patrick wrote:

The alligator is trying to eat the boat and eat the man

Tom s Marcus wrote:

You haven't started with an adverb. Slowly or quickly.

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Steven wrote:

The man slowly swam away then the crocodile compd the bot the compd,broke bot sanck.

Rhianna and Blossom wrote:

You never started with an adverb

Ciaran wrote:

You haven't started with an abverb

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Rhianna and Blossom wrote:

The nasty , Scaly allagater jumped up to bite the man .

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Lucas wrote:

The fierce,mean crocodile tried to get the man

Mr Loftus wrote:

You haven't opened the sentence with a simile.

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Alice and Aisha wrote:

Slowley, a Crocodile came a vile,horrible Crocodile.

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Rhianna and Blossom wrote:

Quickly the scaly , mean alagater tried to bite the man

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Harrison wrote:

Strangely, the crocodile chomped the boat to pieces

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Harvey wrote:

Quickly, I zoomed away from the aligator

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Felicity and Charlotte wrote:

Quickly the Aligator pounced onto the boat whilst the frightened, tattooed man was on the boat.

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Hannah and Maddison wrote:

Mysteriously, a crocodile attacked a man on a boat.

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Amar joe wrote:

Strangely,the man was using the engine to kill the corkadle.

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Ciaran wrote:

Quickly the crocodile ate the boat

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Dan wrote:

Quickly, the man jumped out of his boat because an allagater was chomping down the boat.

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Harrison wrote:

Dangerously, the crocodile bit the small boat

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Joel wrote:

Dangerously the crocodile is trying to eat the man

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Owen wrote:

Dangerously, the man was getting chased by a terrifying,dangerous,vicious aligator.
The man is in shock running as fast as he can from the aligator as quickly as he could.

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Kai wrote:

Quickly the man went away from the hungry crocodile.

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Lewis wrote:

Mysteriously, a crocodile appeared from the ocean to try and eat the human.

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