L.O. I can write an expanded noun phrase.

Emily wrote:

The rollercoaster,that looked like a dark tunnel flipped upside down,was spinning round and round.

Sophie wrote:

This rid is the coldest ride and the biggest one the world

Sara wrote:

The old,abandoned,musty roller coaster began to creak as I walked closer and closer.

Matthew J & Millie wrote:

In the distance a green,misty rolercoster lay within the wet,long grass

Rebecca wrote:

The ride, that was gloomy and terifing, made me vomit

Sophie wrote:

I am doing my homework, while on the plain

Matthew Ronnie wrote:

Unusual ,creepy roller coaster is famous for it terrifying loops.

Luke wrote:

Eventhough everyone seen this unusual,old and very rusty roller coaster they still wanted to go on it.

Ben wrote:

The spooky roller coaster, is Abandoned

Michael wrote:

The abandoned,broken roller coaster flipped upside down.

Dylan wrote:

The Rollacoster that looked as big as Tyrannosaurus rex

Jake and India🐶 wrote:

The dark forest,had a roller-coaster

Ronnie Matthew wrote:

The roller coaster,whiched crashed,was abandoned for years.