June 2018 Write an embedded relative clause about the man in this picture.

Date: 7th Jun 2018 @ 3:22pm

Write an embedded relative clause about the man in this picture.

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Mr Loftus wrote:

The brave, courageous man, Who was in mortal danger, was trying desperately to evade the alligator to make sure that his children remained safe.

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Amaar wrote:

The weirdly tattooed man, who was in a big problem, was getting chased by a crocodile.

Ava wrote:

This is great.

Harrison wrote:

You could of put was getting chased by a strong , big crocodile

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Leon wrote:

The man ,who had stolen some mysterious eggs, was being chased by an aligater

Tom wrote:

You didn't add a full stop.

Leon wrote:

Thanks tom

Ava wrote:

Leon you don’t have a full stop on your reply to Tom.

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Tom wrote:

The man- who was being attaked by an alligator - stood firmly on his rotten, decaying boat.

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Alice wrote:

The man , who was as scared as a puppy going to the vets , tried to run away from the alligator.

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Joel wrote:

The strange tattooed man,who was getting chased by an alagater,tried to save him self

Ava wrote:

You didn’t put a full stop.

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Marcus wrote:

The man, who was trying to save his life, was running from an alligator.

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Felicity wrote:

The surfer (who was trying to save his coach) was being chased by a blood-thirsty alligator with teeth as sharp as a jagged dagger.

Harvey wrote:

Well done that’s awsome

Erin wrote:

This is very good

Ava wrote:

Amazing!

Felicity wrote:

Thank you! :-)

Alfie wrote wrote:

This is ausome!

Joe wrote:

Great sentence

Harrison wrote:

I like your hyphen

Joel wrote:

Nice simle at the end:)

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Hannah wrote:

The river explorer, who was trying to save his life, stood strong on his rotten, flimsy boat.

Felicity wrote:

I like how you didn’t use man you used the river explorer. Very imaginative! :-)

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Harvey wrote:

The man,who just disturbed a random nest, was being chased by an alligator.

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Joel wrote:

The strange tattooed man,who was getting chased tried to save himself.

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Erin wrote:

The man,who was determined to stay alive,stood confidently at the point of the half eaten boat.

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Ava wrote:

The strangely tattooed man,who was ment to be fishing,was being chased by an alligator.

Erin wrote:

Try to add more detail at the end

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Ava wrote:

The crocodile,who was snapping rapidly at the boat,chased the petrified man.

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Dan wrote:

The tattooed man- who was getting chased by a alligator- stood strong on his boat.

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Cody wrote:

The alligator,who was vicious,chased the strong,beast-like man.

Joe wrote:

I love your hyphen

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Joe wrote:

The man who, was shady on his feet, was on the edge of his boat.

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Blossom wrote:

The man, who was trying to save his life, nearly got eaten by An alligator.

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Megan wrote:

The man , who was getting chased by a alligator, was as scared as a cat near water .

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Patrick wrote:

The brave man, who was being chased by a alligator, strongly stayed on his feet

Harrison wrote:

You didn’t put a full stop

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Harrison wrote:

The man , who was getting chased by an alligator, was riding to the deck

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Josh wrote:

The tattooed man, who was being chased by a jagged-toothed aligator, was trying to stand on his wrecked, crowded boat.

Felicity wrote:

I like your adjectives

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Rhianna wrote:

The man, who found mysterious eggs, tried to get away on the speed boat from the crocodile.

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Kai wrote:

The tattoo covered man , who was in his old boat rotting boat , was escaping from the alligator.

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Amy wrote:

The topless man,who was a second away from getting killed, was getting chased by an enormous alligator.

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Francesca wrote:

The tattooed man , who was trying to escape death, willed his boat to go on.

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